Review: Hero of the Five Points

Hero of the Five PointsHero of the Five Points by Alan Gratz

My rating: 2 of 5 stars

They say you can’t judge a book by its cover, and they are correct. The illustration (click the link to see the whole image) by Rednose Studio is amazing and absolutely made me want to read this story, but this short story is a mess.

Hero of the Five Points is set in New Rome (alternate New York) in the Five Points region of Mannahatta (Manhattan) with a culture and political climate identical to Martin Scorsese’s Gangs of New York. In this universe the Americas had at some point been under the control of the Romans and their ruins establish the foundation of the cities in a way similar to what you might find Europe. However Europe and the Americas no longer have communication or trade and the First Nations have a more established cultural foothold in this version of the United Nations of America. With characters lifted roughly from the film, our protagonist, Dalton Dent infiltrates the Dead Rabbits lead by Kit Burns, who is a more thuggish Bill the Butcher, and aided by the also undercover Hellcat Maggie.

The forward tells us it is 1853, which is peculiar. In this story Thomas Edison is an old and prosperous man, which of course he would only be 6 years old in our timeline. Lektricity (ahem, electricity) has come and gone with the science of the day taking a steampunk flare featuring dirigibles, steam power (including steam-powered robots with AI), but not ballistics, instead featuring ray guns. The timeline and logic is a mess. Also in the forward it tells us this short story is from the world of the League of Seven series for middle grade readers, but even pre-teens can do a simple to search to figure out when Edison was born. Integrating actual historical places and figures then not establishing a cursory understanding of their actual characteristics reflects the laziness of the writing in general. There is a lot of wild fantastical world building which must be explored in League of Seven because it is simply distracting here.

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Review: Daughter of Necessity

Daughter of NecessityDaughter of Necessity by Marie Brennan

My rating: 4 of 5 stars

I really enjoy alternate point of view stories, or to clarify, a familiar or famous story told from someone other than the original protagonist’s perspective. Wicked by Gregory Maquire is a classic example. I imagine stories like these start as an academic challenge or writing prompt, but to be successful it takes more than cleverness to interweave a seamless story with well known waypoints and motivations. These types of stories (and indeed all fan fiction) are wonderful experiments of empathy.

Penelope, Queen of Ithaca, who has ruled for twenty years in Odysseus’s absence waiting for him to return from the Trojan War. While his exploits are famously chronicled in The Odyssey, her trials and cleverness are only footnotes. One of the strategies she employs to hold off her 108 suitors is to weave the burial shroud of her father-in-law Laertes. She claims she will select a new husband (and King of Ithaca) from the waiting suitors upon completion of the shroud, however each night she unravels her work to delay for Odysseus’s return. We learn all of this in the Odyssey.

In Daughter of Necessity Marie Brennan brings us into the heart and mind of Penelope. You sense the weight of her responsibilities to Ithaca, her son Telemachus, and her husband. Each night as she finishes the shroud and she contemplates union with each suitor she can imagine the chaos and disorder from each selection. She can read all the potential outcomes in the warp and weft of her cloth as she weaves, then unmakes, the shroud. This is beautiful and clever work. Rich with reference to the source material and rightly honors the sacrifices of Penelope who held the throne against all opposition during Odysseys’s lengthy voyage.

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Review: Acrobatic Duality

Acrobatic DualityAcrobatic Duality by Tamara Vardomskaya

My rating: 5 of 5 stars

We are one, and we are not one.

Science fiction goes through phases and eras which generally mirror our scientific advancements. From the 1950s through 70s it was space, in the 1980s and 90s it was computers. We are in the golden age of science fiction of the mind. Old Man’s War, Lock In, Altered Carbon, Legion and Dollhouse (among many others) have explored questions of self and identity. Amongst a sea of great thinkers and writers of speculative fiction Tamara Vardomskaya finds an unique voice and perspective.

We know where both our body centres are; we can feel it. We think of our two spines as others think of their two legs. Synchronizing is as easy as moving two arms at the same time.

A talented but unremarkable gymnast awakens to find that her consciousness is shared between two talented acrobatic gymnasts; a discipline which requires the coordinated routines of balance and aerial maneuvers in pairs. With their shared proprioception they are unbeatable, soaring to the world championships and heavily favored to win. Vardomskaya does an admirable job translating the essence of the movements, but the senses and limitations of this unique identity is where Acrobatic Duality really shines. The struggle between the distinct bodies and shared mind is thoughtfully explored with beauty, tenderness and honesty.

…blue eyes against dark-brown, searching for what should look right, for when we were I.

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Review: Damage

DamageDamage by David Levine

My rating: 4 of 5 stars

I fell from the warmth and light of the hangar into the black silent chill of space, plummeting toward the teeming, rotating stars.

This is the short story of JB6847½ (a.k.a. “Scraps”) the single-seat space fighter cobbled from the remnants of two destroyed spaceframes and their artificial intelligences. Scraps remembers what it was to be each of her component ships, their missions, their beloved pilots, and her two previous deaths. She carries this with her, along with her new pilot, into desperate battles at the end of a losing campaign.

Tensors and coordinates and arcs of potential traced bright lines across my mind—predictions of our path and our enemies’, a complex dance of physics, engineering, and psychology. I shared a portion of those predictions with my pilot on his cockpit display. He nudged my yoke and our course shifted.

Her own greater senses and perspective keep them safe, while her pilot provides the bravado. Within this short story we get a love story as asymmetrical as most, she is unfailingly devoted to him, programmed to be so; and he cannot see beyond himself.

My pilot’s biologicals, I saw immediately, were well into the red, trembling with anxiety and anger. “We are secure at target coordinates, sir,” I reassured him. “No sign of pursuit.”

“Took you long enough,” he spat. “Where the hell are we?”

The mechanic who created her, Specialist Toman, repairs her and is only person within whom she confides. Toman offers warmth and respect towards Scraps and is alternately her mother and her friend. The science nerd in me was disappointed in a strategy employed at the end of the piece. I don’t want to delve toward spoilers, but it would seem an available tactic (which would have been much more potent) was missed. Fans of The Moon Is A Harsh Mistress or the Cretaceous period would likely have thought similarly to me. The outcome could have been the same while considerably raising the stakes. Ultimately it is a story of conscience versus duty and provides a different perspective of the casualties and calculations of war.

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Review: The Necromancer’s Apprentice

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The Necromancer’s Apprentice by Lillian Stewart Carl

My Rating 2 of 5 stars

Court rumors name Lord Robert Dudley as Queen Elizabeth I’s choice for husband and King Regent of England; the only obstacle is that Lord Dudley is already married. When the Lady Dudley falls to her death, assistant magician and alchemist Dr. Erasmus Pilbeam and his apprentice Martin Molesworth take the case to determine if the death was an accident, or if a plot, by whom. The investigation essentially boils down to Pilbeam spouting a continual stream of insults towards his feckless assistant Molesworth, raising the spirit of Lady Dudley and asking her what happened. When they uncover that a plot did in fact exist all investigation then stops. Without further evidence they conjecture possible motives without questioning the actual minions who facilitated the crime, pin it to an adversary, and call the case closed. With the lack of actual detective work and Pilbeam’s unlikeable nature (and increasingly absurd insults) I can’t find much to recommend.

The Necromancer’s Apprentice is included in the anthology Weird Detectives: Recent Investigations edited by Paula Guran.

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Review: William Shakespeare’s Star Wars: Verily, A New Hope

William Shakespeare's Star Wars: Verily, A New Hope (William Shakespeare's Star Wars, #4)William Shakespeare’s Star Wars: Verily, A New Hope by Ian Doescher
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

If you are interested in reading this you should listen to the audiobook version. Not just because the performance of R2D2 is well worth the price of admission, but because William Shakespeare would want you to. Plays are meant to be performed, not read. They aren’t even written to be read. If you write a story to be read then you embed all the emotional cues necessary to experience the story entire on the first reading. In a play it is assumed that it has been read and re-read by the actor and director. Foreshadowing, emphasis and interpretation are supplied by the performer. That said, all the stage direction is included in the audiobook performance, along with sound effects, into this fun, clever full cast recording.

Mostly this is a very well executed silly idea. In order to get full enjoyment you should already be familiar with the works of Shakespeare and Lucas. There are enough clever moments to keep you smiling throughout, but not enough to continue with the series. I will happily add this to the category of enjoyable mashups like the Heath Ledger films A Knight’s Tale and 10 Things I Hate About You, and the classic episode of Moonlighting, “Atomic Shakespeare” .

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Review: Skin Deep

Skin Deep
Skin Deep by Brandon Sanderson

My rating: 4 of 5 stars

Stephan Leeds does not have multiple personality disorder, he is schizophrenic and sees 47 different imaginary people, each with a specialized skill or ability. He and his 47 aspects are genius consultants for hire and together they are Legion. The premise is absurd and amazing, and like last time the premise outshines the actual investigation but continues to be a marvelous sandbox for storytelling. The rules regarding his projections have continued to evolve and some new twists have added in. I love the diverse character(s) of Legion and find these serialized novellas to be a prefect size for these adventures. Brandon Sanderson is known for his creative magical systems and the mind(s) of Stephen Leeds has a magic all its own.

The first in the series was also a favorite and made my Best of 2014 list.
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Review: Cryptic Coloration

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Cryptic Coloration by Elizabeth Bear

My Rating 2 of 5 stars

We are introduced to Junior Professor Matthew Szczegielniak through the observations of three of his freshman, female students as he is playing a pick-up basketball game in New York City. He is covered in tattoos and piercings with a short blond ponytail and sculpted physique. The hastily sketched girls are entranced by his mysterious beauty and set aside all scholastic ambition to tail him and learn the secrets of his extra-curricular life. When he bolts from his office hours and directly towards a scene of an apparent suicide we discover he has some magical ability and is potentially a regional warden of New York in a group called the Prometheans and has allies within the police force. I often enjoy being thrown into a story in medias res, but eventually I have an expectation that answers are coming. Through all the colorful language and descriptive physicality I never got a sense who these people were, how the world worked or a functional understanding of the magical system employed. I am new to Elizabeth Bear’s work, but her name has been on my “to read” list for some time. Perhaps these characters and settings are part of a larger narrative from her full length novels, but here I never found my footing or a reason to care for the characters. The magical menace was revealed to be the exact creature Matthew anticipated upon his initial analysis of the crime scene. Despite this we never get a full picture why it could only be this creature and only get scraps of physical description, origin and capabilities as the conclusion is in sight. We either were with Matthew who felt no need to speak about his knowledge aloud or with his stumbling students would were too removed from the scene to ask necessary questions to educate the reader. Ultimately this was very frustrating because it seems clear that Elizabeth Bear knows the world and creatures but never gave us a view point to understand it.

Cryptic Coloration is included in the anthology Weird Detectives: Recent Investigations edited by Paula Guran.

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Best of: Short Stories and Novellas 2014

As I described in my introduction this Best of list reflects my favorite Short Stories and Novellas I read in 2014. It is less an awards kinda thing, and more a distillation of my year of reading and a short list of recommendations. Here’s a link to all of my Best of 2014 lists.

The Emperor's SoulBrandon Sanderson – The Emperor’s Soul
Sanderson’s magical systems are always beautifully intricate, and even in this short story it is no different. The worldbuilding, character development and plotting are meticulous and efficient. Everything you want in a Sanderson novel without the kitten-squisher page count.

LegionBrandon Sanderson – Legion
Once again Sanderson provides tremendous world and character building in a small package. This time the magic is mental illness and magical photography. Our hero has multiple personality disorder, but has turned his aspects into assets as he leans on each of their talents to solve crimes.

The Slow Regard of Silent ThingsPatrick Rothfuss – The Slow Regard of Silent Things
Anytime you get something to read from Patrick Rothfuss it is going to be special. This novella is a delicate, poetic peek into the life of Auri and the world of the Underthing beneath the university in Imre. You need not have read the other Kingkiller Chronicle novels to appreciate this haunting story, but you should read them anyway.

Weird Detectives: Recent InvestigationsNeil Gaiman – The Case of Death and Honey
I love Sherlock Holmes stories, but rarely do they add to the cannon in such bold and thoughtful ways. Gaiman plies his considerable talent to describe an investigation unlike any other. Sherlock is old and retired, and Mycroft is dying. In possibly is last and most elusive mystery we see a different, more patient and focused Sherlock in a story told through his own pen.

The Finite CanvasBrit Mandelo – The Finite Canvas
Short stories can sometimes invite us into intimate moments too small for novels. The depth of the world is skillfully implied while keeping our focus firmly on each of these two very different women at the edges of society.

Honorable Mentions:
Park, Paul – Ragnarok, A post-apocalyptic heroic poem in the style of Beowolf.
Butcher, Jim – Love Hurts, A stand-alone story from the Dresden Files series.